Tuesday, 18 November 2014

First draft feedback



Due to cancellations from our actor we could only present half of the music video because we didn't have the rest of the footage. The key points from the feedback:
  • The class liked the chosen location for the first verse 
  • The transition between the flashbacks are good
  • The tunnel scene for the first verse is a bit too long so needs to be cut into more
  • For the next two locations our actor needs to move his mouth more so the lyrics he is singing are clear

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